March 31 2009 Larger than life Lara
Mr.McGuire is reading a book Called Larger Than Life Lara. Lara is th main character in the book. When Lanie described Lara she was described:
1. FAT
2. strong
3. Very sarcastic
4. She also acted really nice in a way
5. She sounds like a good friend

Laney describes herself like:

1.the boss of the house.
2. like she has all the responsibility.
3. She is like the mom in the house and their is no adult only herself and many kids.
4. she is very responsible.
5. she has a family that is not so responsible.
6. She has brown hair.
7. her brothers and her do not get along.
8. she is caring .
9. when one of her family members get in trouble she is always involved.
10.she likes baseball.
11.boys do not really like her.
12.she takes control.
13.she is the boss of many things .
14. she has chores her bothers won't have.
15. she goes to the store because her parents and brothers or guardians are too incapable of helping her do what they should be helping with.



2/10/09 twighlight
today i read a little bit of twilight and at the and Edward wanted to save bella .
to do that he had to suck the venom out of her arm. But could not stop and she allmost died but he still let her go even though he wanted to keep on sucking but then again he wanted to let her go.

He loves bella!!!!!!!!



newmoon
today i read that it was bellas b-day and she told everyone not to get her a present well no one listens and they did so when edward gave her a present she was tring to open it and she gave herself a deep cut and jasper is a bad vampire so when jasper smelt the blood he attacked bella and gave her a deeper cut and edward tried to save her because he new that jasper was a bad vampire so edward slammed bella down and so that jasper could not get to her blood. m


sssoooooooo romantic!!!!!!


1/13/09 Mr. McGuire said
You must log the date in your reading log. That is the only way to know when you read!
I can tell that you are working hard on your journal entries. Good job, and keep it
Areas in red still can be improved.

3 or B

  • Entries have several details from the book
  • Specific details from book relate to the topic and thoughts, ideas, and opinions
  • One paragraph (5 - 7 sentences) each day
  • Understanding of book demonstrated in journal
  • Explains the "So What?", theme, or lesson
  • Format is correct
  • Reading from SSR and home is logged in book journal daily NEED TO DATE!
  • Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization is correct



1/6/09 1 opinion of the main character
The main character in my book is Janie.One opinion of Janie is that she think that she has a stupid name. She said that she has a stupid way of spelling her name because she is 15 and about to learn how to drive and needs to have a sexier way to spell her name rather than Janie it needs to be like Jayne. At least that is what she said.



1/5/09Two goals for 2009
1. My little goal that I want to accomplish for 2009 would have to be me and my teachers to get along so we become friends and teachers that do not hate each other and understand each other.The reason why i want to get along with the teachers is because if you get along with the teachers they will get along with you. I am going to accomplish this goal by turning in all my homework. And i need to keep friends out of my way.I am not saying that in a mean way I am saying that because I have goals that I need to accomplish and i am not going to let anything stop me!!
2.overall I always wanted to make honor roll (GREAT GOAL, GOOD LUCK! ) and that is going to be what I AM GOING TO DO!!! I am not going to let anything stop me because this year i have done really good and i hope that it stays that way!!!!!!the reason why i want to raise my grade is not not just because i will get money but because i want to make my dad proud and i want to see Mr.McGuire to smile more.I also want to have a good education and go to college and grow up and be something that pays good money. I am not doing this for the heck of it i am doing his many reasons. I am going to accomplish this goal by making sure that i turn in all of my homework assignments and becoming a better student


12/18/08 Summer Said my book is twilight it is a good book for you heal read it.the main character is Bella. Bella is a girl that meets Edward and he think that Bella hot or cute. He saves her from the van that hits her and then Edward put is hand out and they both are safe. in the book the major problem is that Bella is leaving Edward town and my not came back.



12/18/08 Shelby... That seems really embarrassing .My book is about Jenny cause she is babysitter and she is scare cause Mr.Hagen try to kill her at the last time he try to hurt Jenny she dunk and Mr.Hagen went of the cliff and he hit the rocks she wanted to run but she was scared I just started on my book today it is call The Baby Sitter 2.Your book seems in trouble.


12/18/08 totally Joe

Today i started this really awesome book and this is some stuff that happen in it today. OK today there is a guy named joe and he has to write a alphabiographie and just in case you do not know what that is it is a biography of yourself in alphabetical order. So he right the most embarrassing things that happen in his life.Hopefully when i read on hopefully it will keep on getting funnier and funnier when i go on.!!!!!!!!



12/17/08 On The Run/major problems

Some of the major problems in my book are going to to be listed down below.

One = meg is afraid that when aiden goes to his job him and meg are going to be separated and they will not see each other for a long time.
Two = The little girl thinks that she knows who mg and aiden are because on the TV it pronounced the fugitives and then she seen meg and knows that they are the two falconers .
These are major problems because is that little girl knows who they are then don't you think that she is going to tell her parents that she found the two missing fugitives. Plus if meg and aiden split up then who knows what is happening to one or another or if they got caught. I think that if meg and aiden get split up not only not knowing what is happening to one or another but what if they get KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



12/15/08 on line journal
Scoring my online journal was better than i thought that it would be. I think that the reason why i got a B on my online journal is because i wrote a lot with details and how i describe what environment they are in. I think that i did do good too. My dad said why do you have this stuff now and we did not. So he like the online journal process too. When scoring online i also notice my dad paying close attention to make sure it makes sense. I hope that next time we score our online journal i get a better grade than i did.I am not saying that because i am not happy with my score but because i no that i can better!
Next time we score our online journals put you seat belts on because i am going to blow you mind.



12/10/08 on the run #2

two events that happen today are 1.) Aiden and Meg found out yesterday that the nurses have mug shots from when they were at sunny dale and they had to run so they cannot get caught. They were running down the hall and they suddenly realized that they were going around in circles. They looked around and there was a nurses looking for her 2 patients Meg and Aiden. They tried to hide but Meg was a little too slow and the nurse saw her and followed them. They went into the bathroom and found a window and climbed out faster than the nurse could get to them. They did not only escape from the juvenile correction facility they also escaped from the nurse too!!

another event that happen today is when they were trying to escape they found a car and they went inside it and they woke up and there was someone in there and they were driving and he did not care. That is important because you do not know who is driving you and where he is taking.

I hope that they are going to be OK because what if he takes them to the police!!!!!!!!



12/08/08on the run #2
The main character is Meg and Aiden . Aiden is more like me than Meg because when Meg has an idea you know that it is bad and Aiden would be like " i don't know if we should do this. Like i would have. Meg is a very energetic person she always has an idea in mind even when something is coming in her way she always has something in her mind to do.

12/4/08 I had troubles in getting to Solla Sollew

Mr.McGuire read I had trouble getting to solla sollew and in todays book journal i am going to tell you the point of the story. The point of the story is that even if you go somewhere where people say that there is no troubles you never no if they are right so do not give your hopes up because there is troubles everywhere no matter if it was in solla sollew or in Chillicothe. Joking but the point is no matter where you go there is always going to be some kind of trouble. For example when the character in the book got to solla sollew " where there was no troubles" until he got to the door and the person who keeps solla sollew nice and keeps track of everything said there was one trouble he could not get inside. So no matter if you think everything is going to be fine, no troubles you are so wrong because everywhere you will go you will have troubles.

12/3/08 Colton Sword bird
You might like this book written by Nancy Yi Fan. You would like this book because if you like fantasy books and birds. This book is also a very good book if you like cardinals and blue jays. You would like the book if you like pieces and teamwork. If you also like adventure in books.

12/2/08 five smooth stones
A girl named hope was allowed to stay awake for a little while to write in her diary when she got distracted by a wounded solider.She cried for help as the solider trotted along the opposite way,hopes mother ran out and gave him a warm place to sleep and in the morning he thought that he was going to die that day but, Hop and mother helped him. The next day hope went to school and her friend got humiliated by teacher and everyone.Her friend had to go to a corner with a hat that had dunce on it.saying =(baby good for ~ nothing) that is what the meaning back in the days when dunce was still around
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At the end of the book i think that Winnie and Sal is going to really get used to each other. Sal and Amigo are going to really going to not be afraid of each other now that Sal is not afraid of Amigo and i think that at the end of the book summer is going to get in trouble for telling a lie about brain and Sal and Winnie and Sal are going to get back at summer.

11/17/08winnie

The last time that i made a prediction that was wrong was when I thought Winnie and summer was going to get into a fight.Instead the opposite happened Sal came over to Winnie's house to take care of her horse and summer came over winnie thought that summer was mad at her or did not like her because winnie is a girl that likes to play outside and go on adventures and summer is the type of girl who dos her nails and and she makes a big deal if she broke a nail so two type's of diff. people.


11/14/08 Cyranda H. said,
I think these are some really good comments. I hope you like the book Winne.



11/14/08

Sal said that she was going to come over to Winnie's house and she did not.Winnie called sals grandma and she said that she as not there she was at the tanning bed. Winnie asked with who? with her friend summer.Winnie said that is not her friend that is mine and her worst enemy so i think that Winnie is confused. I think that Sal and Winnie are going to get in a fight and cracker is going to take friendly back to where it was sent from!!!!



11/13/08 Lily said,
I like these books too! I was going to read Friendly foal but you got it. Have you read the last 6 books? You should have.



11/13/08 Winnie
the main character is named Winnie. Winnie's mom died two years ago and her mom owned a shop a horse shop to help tame them to not be crazy. Winnie's mom died two years ago as i said and Winnie and her house hold family members had to live without a mom and so, yes, it is very hard because i have to deal with it too but my mom is not dead. well Winnie has short brown hair and loves animals.She is very gentle with them. Winnie took care f her moms horse shop and many people come to Winnie to take care of their horses for them so she does and she took the shop in to her shop and now Winnie is just like her mom.

11/12/08 Mr. McGuire said
Hey Speedwriter, how about putting in a few periods so the reader can breathe.

11/12/08 Winnie the horse gentler

In my book today Winnie and winnie's family was in the barn when the horses and the cow and the goats were getting very mad and mason her brother was playing with the goats attacked him and winnie got down and started to beat the goat and then the horses tried to attack winnie and sal got out I wonder if she is OK they have not mentioned her yet so I am going to keep on reading to find out but that is what going to happened next .


11/11/08 Desire' Said...
So Winnie is a horse tamer . This book sounds like a book I would read. I am guessing Sal likes tame horses not wild ones. And that is why Sal takes Horses and gives them to Winnie to tame them.



11/11/08 Winnie
The best part so far in my book is when Sal brought a new horse over to her Winnie's house because Winnie has to train it to be nice and to be tamed so that she don't hurt anybody because Sal usually does not like horses and Winnie has to take care of them for her . Winnie was not told by people for a while to tame their hoses since her mom died so i think that this is going to be a big opportunity to open back up her mom's taming horses store so now Minnie can make money so I think that that would make her mom happy and apparently she does too because she is going to open up the shop again!!!



11/10/08 Mr. McGuire said
Can you imagine yourself as a caretaker for animals? Would Winnie be safe in your hands?

Please capitalize the first letter of proper nouns (like Winnie, Sal)
11/10/08 winnie
In my book today the main character was told by her friend that she was coming over. Winnie was surprised because Sal has not came over for a while so Winnie was wondering why she was coming over and so Sal came over and she seen Sal's (saw Sal's) car shaking and she had a horse in it that had a horse in it and wanted Winnie to train it so now Winnie is stuck with another horse and she is happy and so would I.


11/7/08 Winnie the horse gentler
I started a new book so because I was not really getting it and I read the first chapter and it was really good and I could understand it. I am go Winnie I think that the foal will become unafraid of Winnie because I think that the foal will realize that her mom is gone and now Winnie is going to be their for her now and take care of her. I think this because Winnie has taken care of many other animals and i know that some how Winnie will find a way to take care of the foal too.When Winnie tried to give the foal some food the foal turned away i think that the foal is really sad about its mom dyeing i know that i would be to but on the other i did not know that horses has feelings I just thought that horses could hear feel but i did not know that horses had feelings.I thought that horses or just flat out animals didn't have feelings. The reason why I am saying this is because some animals eat their babies when they are born so why love the when they get a little older I mean they can still eat them right. another reason why I said that is because they are going to need to grow p on their own.This is what I think and some of my predictions.

11/7/08 Mr. McGuire said
I'll bet you can relate to her. I can imagine your friends coming to you about a problem. I am sure you would have good advise.

11/6/08
grace notes
today i started a new book and this is what some of it is about. Grace is a person that can help people with hat to do with people that are in relationships or any kinds of problems by checking their body language so she made a blog that people go on and she helps people on her blog by people telling what they are havening trouble with or what they want to know and she tells them on her blog and they keep writing her back and forth so she can answer their problems.

11/5/08 Annie love


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