Trindi's+Book+Journal

The bowling pin that got me by is when I was in the beauty pageant. My Sister and my mom help me get ready. When the day came I had to get ready like a couple of hours before. They were with me. Then when we went up to get our numbers I got really n
 * what is the bowling pin that helped you get by?**

 I think that stories should not always be happy ever after because what is the point of reading a book if you know that the ending is going to be like the other book and be a happy ending. I like a book that you always do not know what is going to happen next. So if stories always have a happy ending then I would probably not read as much books as I do now. I also think that a book should get the reader like in the book. So then if they always have a happy ending then it would not be as much fun to read as much books. If all the books you read has a happy ending then reading would be boring. **is a example story with a happy ending:**  In a town there lived a girl who had two step sisters named misty and christen. They got every thing they wanted and only thing she got was handy down cloths. The step sisters was the same age as Madison. Well on day Madison walked in on her evil step mom named Jane. They were planing to kill her father that night. Madison went to tell her dad but her dad did not believe her. Her dad told her to except her new step mom and step sisters. Then that night came and they acted as nothing was wrong. Madison asked her dad to take her to her friends house. Then when they got ready to leave Madison said good by to her step mom with a smile. Then her step sister and mother try to kill him. But he saw them and said run to the car and hurry. So they ran to the car and drove away.  In a town there lived a girl who had two step sisters named misty and christen. They got every thing they wanted and only thing she got was handy down cloths. The step sisters was the same age as Madison. Well on day Madison walked in on her evil step mom named Jane. They were planing to kill her father that night. Madison went to tell her dad but her dad did not believe her. Her dad told her to except her new step mom and step sisters. Well the night came and her step sister and mother locked her in a closet with her mouth taped with duck tape. Her hands were also taped too. Then the next thing she knew she herd a gun shout and then foot steps leaving. Her dad was dead. Madison cried. a+ = no mistakes a= one mistake b= two mistakes c= four mistakes d= five mistakes f= six or more mistakes __1. did not indent Paragraph 2.capitalization 3. run on sentence 4. at least a 3 Paragraph post 5. at least 4 sentences in a Paragraph 6 . do not have no post__
 * endings be happy ever after?**
 * HERE IS AN EXAMPLE OF A BAD ENDING:**
 * If I could write a scale for grading a blog it would look like this**
 * spelling**
 * Also if you have theses mistakes it will count as two points**


 * The main charter in**
 * BASED ON A TRUE** **story**

If I wrote a book the main charter would be Brittany low. It would be about a girl who lives with her mom because her parents get split up. One day Brittany would get picked up from school. she barely would get picked up from school so she knew it had to be something important. So she would get in her mom car and expected something for the worst. Then when they got to her house her mom said that your grandpa is in the hospital to get that surgery. Then his heart started to have an off beat. Then Brittany started to cry. He is not looking to good. Then she asked if she could go see him. Then she went to see him he was in a in a deep sleep. Brittany stayed at the hospital that night. Then the next day they pulled the plug because there was no hope. Brittany was in the room when they did it. Then he passed. Brittany cried after the showing and when they lowed the coffin she dropped a rose. She still misses him everyday..

I read click here. It is about a girl trying to fit in 7th grade. She has a only one friend nammed Jill. Well when she gets her track thing they are not in the same track. She tried to get her mom to let her swich tracks and her mom said no. So on the first day a girl nammed rose called her puppet because of her feet. So then she hit the girl in the face in the bathroom at school.

Laney charter in Larger Than Life Laura is like:**  *
 * 2/31/09 Larger Than Life Laura
 * her mom does not live with her
 * her dad drinks and has a bad temper
 * her room is up in the attic but she shares it with her dad
 * she only has 3 things on her wall, they are a shelf, a poster and a shoe
 * she put the shoe on her wall because she won a race.
 * she has a brother in 9th grade.
 * she has two other older brothers.
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she is the youngest
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she used to play baseball but the boys told her no girls allowed
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she is in 4th grade
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she has to cook for her self
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she wants to be in a play
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">she is going to fix mac and cheese for her dad to let her be in a play at school
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">her room is lime gree
 * <span style="color: rgb(170, 39, 39);">her table only has 5 chairs so if they want to eat together than someone has to pull up a chair
 * Legal bage**l

<span style="color: rgb(167, 73, 73);">One cause and effect in my book is the collage that the main charter is going to go to don't allow doges. The effe ct is she had to get rid of her dog named penny.

<span style="color: rgb(45, 88, 200);">1/21/09 Mr. McGuire said You need to log the date in your reading log every day! Also, I would like to see more details about the book in each entry. Areas in <span style="color: rgb(216, 70, 70);">red could be improved. =<span style="color: rgb(53, 75, 208);">**1 or D** =
 * <span style="color: rgb(53, 75, 208);">Entries do not always have details from the book
 * <span style="color: rgb(53, 75, 208);">Specific detail from book usually are on topic
 * <span style="color: rgb(220, 65, 90);">One paragraph (2 - 4 sentences) each day
 * <span style="color: rgb(208, 53, 66);">Detailed understanding of book demonstrated in journal
 * <span style="color: rgb(53, 75, 208);">Format errors
 * <span style="color: rgb(208, 53, 60);">Reading from SSR and home has missing days logged in book journal
 * <span style="color: rgb(53, 75, 208);"><span style="color: rgb(216, 70, 70);">Spelling, <span style="color: rgb(220, 71, 71);">punctuation, and capitalization has mistakes

on the way home from school laurie ran into this guy she likes. then she dropps her books. then she head loud mucic from her moms house. One opinion of my main charter is that she thanks that they don't need to have the get together for the pants. I thank they should because if they get lost they may never see the pants again or some one might steel them.I also thank that they should not also have the get together because they made up this rule that you can not see what they have write on them till they have them. But they have not seen them latly.
 * <span style="color: rgb(65, 52, 203);">Please put the date before every entry! ** <span style="color: rgb(231, 13, 18);">a mother to embarrass me
 * <span style="color: rgb(65, 52, 203);">Please put the date before every entry! **<span style="color: rgb(109, 202, 104);">The Second summer of the sister hood

<span style="color: rgb(225, 20, 27);">The major problem in my book is when Idi teacher leaves. It is the big problem because she steps up to be the teacher. Then it leads up to little problems.Like when the school bord came up to the school and was looking for her old teacher. Then they asked her where her old teacher is. Then Ida said that her mom was ill and that she was going to close the school for the rest of the year.
 * <span style="color: rgb(65, 52, 203);">Please put the date before every entry! **<span style="color: rgb(233, 37, 37);">The major problem

<span style="color: rgb(239, 1, 1);"> **<span style="color: rgb(65, 52, 203);">Please put the date before every entry! **__scoring our journals ``<span style="color: rgb(213, 213, 93);">I thank that that scoring our jornals is fun. Also it helps to see what you need to improve on because it depends on the grade you get. like a 1234. I got a 2 because of my spelling. <span style="color: rgb(13, 255, 0);">

<span style="color: rgb(247, 24, 24);"> __12/10/08 The Secret School <span style="color: rgb(13, 12, 12);"> One important event so far is when Ida came to school. Then her teacher told them that sch0ol was going to be let out because her ill. That she was left on the train tomorrow. I thank that it is important because it tell the problem. Also it is what lead her to be a teacher. She had to sneak in the school house because the teacher locked it. she had to climb in the window. Another part is important so far is when her friend gave her the idea. I thank that it is important because if her friend never gave her the idea then she would never of thought of it. I would of, Also that her parents said that she could do it. I thank that is what made her want to do it because people thought she could.

12/8/2008 __Granny Makes Soup The main charter is Rosie. She is 12. She got in a fight with her friend Baily because he told her to get over her self. Then she went to her grandmas. They started to make soup. Then her grandma asked her what is bothering her. At first she did not want to tell her grandma. But when hey made the soup they started to talk about shoes. Then her grandma got her to talk about Bailey and their fight. If I was her I would ask her what to do.

<span style="color: rgb(203, 16, 16);"> __12/5/08 Seth Roberts <span style="color: rgb(48, 24, 24);">If you want a good book I would try <span style="color: rgb(15, 245, 24);">the hay meadow it is a Gary Paulsen book it is my favourite book ever if you like adventures this is the book for you. It is about a boy and he is not even a teen ager and he haves to take sheep to a hay meadow. I can not tell you the rest I would spoil the end.

<span style="color: rgb(15, 245, 24);"><span style="color: rgb(33, 18, 18);"> 13/1/08 __Driveby__<span style="color: rgb(15, 245, 24);"> Jimmy and his brother and sister was walking Mina home from a birt5hday party. But then HIS SISTER ran behind the library. Her brother went to get her. Jimmy stayed in front. Then this gang in a car came by and shout Jimmy. After Jimmy funeral they went home and people brought food over to make his mom feel better. Then the gang came back and took <span style="color: rgb(34, 27, 27);"> Mina. Jimmy t tried to find her but he couldn't find her. So then he had to fleep on the flor in the bathroom with Mina. He woke up and fond her mom crying in the kitchen holding a pincher of J Jimmy. <span style="color: rgb(232, 26, 23);"> 11/17/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(41, 31, 31);">One prediction I had that is wrong is that Greta was going to help Glory. But she just stole of of Glory. Also when the cops came Greta pushed Glory out of her way just to save her self. But at Glory thou at that she was pushing her to get her to run. Then the cops cardamom was il Glory then put her in A FOSTER HOME. __Glory__ seems interesting.

1/14/08 Summer said The book Glory is a good i read it and so has Rachael. I like how you been writing about it that is good keep it up and you will have a good grade.

11/14/08 glory Glory meet this other homeless girl. Her name is Greta. Then Greta asked her if she could give her a few tips about live on the sit.Then she invited her to live with her. Then the cops came and Glory is going to a foster home. <span style="color: rgb(218, 31, 27);"> 11/13/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(19, 11, 11);">Glory made it to Boston. She took a bus. I think Glory is shy and scared all the time. I would be too. Also I think that Glory is really sick but she don't know it because she looks really pale. Also she don't have a gob or a place to sleep. If I was Glory I would of just stayed in Shadow Tree because I would steel have a gob and a place to live. But then I would go to Boston too because she made a promise to Katie that she would go there. <span style="color: rgb(229, 16, 16);"><span style="color: rgb(15, 245, 24);"> 11/12/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(13, 12, 12);">Becky asked Glory if she wanted to stay with her. She is afraid of Becky husband. And then they throw a party for Glory to meet all of their family members. Glory feel shy at first. But then when it came to dinner she feel scared because all of the grown ups were drinking wine. T hats the thing she done before Katie and Glory went down to the lake. I would be scared too. Also she is only living with Becky for one more week. But I think that at the end she is going to get enrolled in school. Also live with Becky for ever.

11/11/08Taylor S. said Your right.I wouldn't want to sleep in a car aether.There is no room to lay down!Anyway keep writing good posts!

<span style="color: rgb(229, 11, 11);">11/11/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(17, 19, 18);">g<span style="color: rgb(11, 10, 10);">o<span style="color: rgb(8, 8, 8);">. <span style="color: rgb(8, 8, 8);"><span style="color: rgb(218, 16, 16);">st part so far is when she moved in with Becky because Glory gets of of the streets. Also she felt shy then when she is by Becky she feels safe. She The be <span style="color: rgb(17, 19, 18);"><span style="color: rgb(218, 16, 16);"> has not meet Becky husband yet, I think that she will be afraid of him. I would be.Another good part in the book is when she finds out that the car she has been staying in got robbed. You would not think that she would take up Becky offer. After she said no thanks. If I was her I would of just took her offer in the first place because I would not sleep in a car even if I had no where else to  <span style="color: rgb(218, 16, 16);"><span style="color: rgb(11, 10, 10);"> 11/10/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Glory fixed super. The chicken was not all the way done.Then every one puked. Now all of Becky kids is make fun of Glory. I think that Glory is going to say that her mom is feeling better. Then go back to sleeping the car that she fond. 11/7/08 __Glory__ <span style="color: rgb(15, 16, 15);">Glory moved in with Becky because someone got in her car that she stayed in and took her money that she was saving. I predict that Glory will tell Becky and her family what had happen in the past because she cannot lie forever. Also I think that Becky will adopt Glory. Then she will end up have to go to school and she has never been to school. Then she would have to get a fake id. Then Becky would have to find out what happen to Glory and where she is from.

<span style="color: rgb(0, 25, 255);">11/7/08 <span style="color: rgb(56, 71, 245);">Mr. McGuire said Were you surprised that Glory did not move in with Becky? I know I was.

Please capitalize the first letter of a proper noun (Glory). <span style="color: rgb(218, 16, 16);"> 1/6/08 glory got payed for the first time. She bought cloths with it and a blanket too. Then Becky offer glory to live with her. but glory did not take the offer. Then becky got a call from the school that her kid broke her ankle. So then Glory had to close up the store early.

<span style="color: rgb(255, 29, 0);">11/5/08 <span style="color: rgb(231, 39, 46);"> __Glory__

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